Hmm... you're certainly getting better. But the proportions are still a little wrong. His neck is far too big, his eye indents are too... indented, his cheeks (I don't mean his cheekbones) aren't nearly pronounced enough (Draiman has a much rounder face), and his forehead is massive, even for Draiman!
Eye indents? I didn't draw those in, unless you mean that line that was supposed to be his under eyelid that I admit was curved the wrong way to be an under-eyelid. If there's one thing I've been known to do, it's exaggerate. Even when I'm doing realistic portraits (which I wasn't in this, far from it) something's going to be much too big. It's just something I do when I draw.
David is awesome ^^
But the proportions are still a little wrong. His neck is far too big, his eye indents are too... indented, his cheeks (I don't mean his cheekbones) aren't nearly pronounced enough (Draiman has a much rounder face), and his forehead is massive, even for Draiman!
But still, getting there!
If there's one thing I've been known to do, it's exaggerate. Even when I'm doing realistic portraits (which I wasn't in this, far from it) something's going to be much too big. It's just something I do when I draw.